Dawn Raffel, Carrying the Body

The territory this book stakes out is the abject; the female body as the site of horror, of fluids, leaks, blood, birth: "Unsoppable," in the narrator's phrase. But it's this horror from the perspective of the women themselves, who are not exactly horrified. "Oh, drink! See such a trough as this! Unsoppable. The blood was on the bedding, and afterward the afterbirth."

Though the "Aunt" of the story is dry: her lips are cracked, she cannot get enough to drink (gin). There is no juice or milk for the child, only tonic. At some point, someone says, "there is no balm in the house."

Eve K. Sedgwick suggests to her students of 19th-century fiction that they keep a tally of the "Gross Novelistic Product," how much money is made and exchanged in the novel. You could try figuring out the gross fluid product of Carrying the Body, or maybe not the gross, but how it's distributed, floods here, droughts there. There is gin, there is tonic (though never together, in the same glass), there is gray bathwater. No juice, no milk, no drinking water.

Raffel makes a weird and arresting use of the partitive: " 'Here,' said Mother, 'have some, have less.' " A tendency to vanish, dry up, dwindle. A mother as an offering that retracts. There's an Alice-in-Wonderland illogic to the invitation to have some, have less, though in Alice it's illogic of plenitude (something like, "how can I have more cake when I haven't had any yet?").

There is also a great deal of "whatever." Though not as a dialect marker, it's not the whatever of teen culture. It's also not the general; it's the name of the singular. --well, I can't exactly prove that. Anyway, there's a particular construction, "what with whatever," that the Aunt often uses: "The house collects dirt, what with the child and also what with the mice, of course, and what with whatever it is that is living in the pantry." (The child is only another species of vermin, like mice and "whatever.")